
Public sector recruitment works differently from much of the private sector. Rather than hiring on the strength of a CV alone, most councils, NHS trusts, government departments and arm's length bodies ask candidates to demonstrate that they meet a defined set of selection criteria. These criteria are usually drawn from the person specification attached to the role and will cover essential requirements first, then any desirable ones.
This is not box-ticking for its own sake. Public bodies are accountable for spending public money fairly, and they need to show that every candidate was assessed against the same standards. That means your application will often be scored by a panel working through each criterion in turn. If a criterion is not clearly evidenced, it scores nothing — even if you are more than capable of doing the job.
The good news is that this process rewards preparation. Once you understand how to structure your evidence, you can write applications that are genuinely persuasive rather than simply confident.
STAR stands for Situation, Task, Action, Result. It is the most widely recommended structure for written evidence in public sector applications, and for good reason: it keeps you focused on what you actually did, rather than what your team did or what you believe about yourself.
A useful rule of thumb is roughly 10% Situation, 10% Task, 60% Action and 20% Result. Most candidates spend far too long on context and too little on what they actually did.
Selection criteria are often written in broad, slightly abstract language: "experience of managing change", "ability to build effective partnerships", "knowledge of safeguarding legislation". Before writing a single word, break each one down.
Ask yourself what the panel is really testing. "Ability to build effective partnerships" might mean working across teams, managing a supplier relationship, or liaising with external agencies. "Managing change" could be anything from restructuring a service to introducing a new system. Look at the wider job description for clues, and consider what the role will demand in its first six months.
Then map your experience against it. You do not need a dramatic example — a well-evidenced everyday situation is far stronger than a vague claim about a major project. Voluntary work, committee roles, caring responsibilities and community involvement all count if they demonstrate the right behaviour.
Give each criterion its own clearly headed paragraph so the panel can find it easily. Never bundle two criteria into one answer, and never assume the reader will infer a link — make it explicit.
Be specific about your actions. Instead of "I helped improve the service", write "I reviewed the appointment booking process, identified that 40% of calls were for cancellations, and introduced an online amendment form". Numbers, timeframes and named tools all add credibility.
Where a criterion asks for knowledge rather than experience, you still need to show application. Rather than quoting legislation, explain how you have used it in practice, or how you would apply it in the role. Panels want to see judgement, not a recital of facts.
Keep your language plain and active. Avoid jargon, acronyms and management-speak. If you would not say it aloud in an interview, it probably does not belong in your application.
Once your first draft is complete, leave it overnight and return with fresh eyes. Read each answer against its criterion and ask: could a stranger score this fairly without knowing me? If any part relies on assumption, tighten it.
Check spelling, grammar and consistency of job titles and dates, since accuracy matters in roles where attention to detail is part of the job. Read it aloud to catch clunky sentences, and if you can, ask someone unfamiliar with your work to check whether your examples make sense.
Finally, keep a copy of what you submitted. Every example you write is excellent interview preparation, because public sector panels frequently return to the same criteria at interview stage. Approach the process as a chance to tell a clear, honest story about what you have done and what you can offer — and your evidence will do the persuading for you.
Understanding the organisation's values, recent projects, and market position lets you write a tailored letter that stands out.
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